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Showing posts with label Reflections. Show all posts
Our first draft feedback
Feedback
We received a number of varied feed backs. The average score was between 28-32 which is just coming into the level 4.
To work on
* The main feedback that we got was that people did not like the mis en scene that we always have black and white. They said that we should try and make it more colorful.
* We also received feedback about the fact that they don't think that the group look as harmonized as they could be. Some people are asking what the point in Beth and Drea are in the group and it isn't clear what they are doing?
* We also were told that the music room scenes are a bit disjointed and random, we should either maybe film more bits similar to this or scarp this and fill it in with other parts.
Good bits
* The editing was really good people thought. They think that the transitions are really smooth.
* They also thought that Emma's performance in the band was really good. They said that her lip syncing is of a really good standard.
We received a number of varied feed backs. The average score was between 28-32 which is just coming into the level 4.
To work on
* The main feedback that we got was that people did not like the mis en scene that we always have black and white. They said that we should try and make it more colorful.
* We also received feedback about the fact that they don't think that the group look as harmonized as they could be. Some people are asking what the point in Beth and Drea are in the group and it isn't clear what they are doing?
* We also were told that the music room scenes are a bit disjointed and random, we should either maybe film more bits similar to this or scarp this and fill it in with other parts.
Good bits
* The editing was really good people thought. They think that the transitions are really smooth.
* They also thought that Emma's performance in the band was really good. They said that her lip syncing is of a really good standard.
Digipack Peer Feedback
Love the photograph where you're on the stairs, its so professional, the black and white theme is nice, not sure about the text, it looks a bit microsoft wordy
I think there is far to much going on in most of the squares in this didgipack.
I think there is a lot to much to look at so if someone was looking at it in a shop they would not read all of it.
Good variety of pictures, introduces the band well. Could add colour similar to music video.
WWW: Great Hybrid Beauty Font! Great quality photos, perfect special thanks page and cool picture page. EBI: You lose the black and white like you did in the video. Remove the slanted on 'hybrid beauty'. Difficult to read some of the song names because of hair. CD is basic but effective but would be better if it wasn't on a black background. Special thanks page is brilliant don't change unless adding colour!
As said above, I really like Hybrid Beauty's digipak as the colour scheme is brilliant and it really establishes the identity of a 3 piece group;
The hybrid beauty digipak also uses a lot of pictures. All the pictures look professional. A lot of people have used a black and white background, maybe use colour? The fonts and the pictures go well with the with the rest of the digipak. Over all the layout is really good and it all goes well together.
Middle panel on the top - not loving this font and style. The CD isn't too strong either, overlay a semi transparent image of the band in B&W to create stronger imagery, and the blue link doesn't work - try making it a mid-grey to complete the colour scheme. Overall, though, the layout is great, and goes with the conventions of the genre!
flawless.
I like the fonts that have been used as they are very individual. There isn't much colour which means the digipak doesn't stand out. The lack of colour doesn't go with the artists genre.
i like the digipack but it feels very busy, maybe calming it down will help.
Maybe add in a lyrics page rather than 2 pages of pictures.
i like the black and white theme i think there could be more writing and less pictures
White text on white background makes it hard to read Copied me for the download thing, copyrighted it Font looks strange with blocks instead of gaps in o's
Fun layout, girly vibe. Black and white a bit boring? 'Special Thanks' page looks cheesy
i'm confused as to what the album name is as there is only the band name on it - does this mean it is self-titled or am i missing it? i like the black and white colour scheme and the use of the pictures throughout. the fonts and colours link together on each section and the 'special thanks' is a cute addition.
Good theme with black and white, interesting digipak pages. Improvement: make it fit a bit better into the boxes so it looks more professional
Most people seem to think that our digipak is over-busy, however most people also seem to think that it's too monochromatic, and that we've used too many pictures. However, a few people think it's pretty good as it is, with minor changes needed. Due to the mixed response, I think we should have a group meeting, so we can discuss the feedback together.
I think there is a lot to much to look at so if someone was looking at it in a shop they would not read all of it.
Good variety of pictures, introduces the band well. Could add colour similar to music video.
WWW: Great Hybrid Beauty Font! Great quality photos, perfect special thanks page and cool picture page. EBI: You lose the black and white like you did in the video. Remove the slanted on 'hybrid beauty'. Difficult to read some of the song names because of hair. CD is basic but effective but would be better if it wasn't on a black background. Special thanks page is brilliant don't change unless adding colour!
As said above, I really like Hybrid Beauty's digipak as the colour scheme is brilliant and it really establishes the identity of a 3 piece group;
The hybrid beauty digipak also uses a lot of pictures. All the pictures look professional. A lot of people have used a black and white background, maybe use colour? The fonts and the pictures go well with the with the rest of the digipak. Over all the layout is really good and it all goes well together.
Middle panel on the top - not loving this font and style. The CD isn't too strong either, overlay a semi transparent image of the band in B&W to create stronger imagery, and the blue link doesn't work - try making it a mid-grey to complete the colour scheme. Overall, though, the layout is great, and goes with the conventions of the genre!
flawless.
I like the fonts that have been used as they are very individual. There isn't much colour which means the digipak doesn't stand out. The lack of colour doesn't go with the artists genre.
i like the digipack but it feels very busy, maybe calming it down will help.
Maybe add in a lyrics page rather than 2 pages of pictures.
i like the black and white theme i think there could be more writing and less pictures
White text on white background makes it hard to read Copied me for the download thing, copyrighted it Font looks strange with blocks instead of gaps in o's
Fun layout, girly vibe. Black and white a bit boring? 'Special Thanks' page looks cheesy
i'm confused as to what the album name is as there is only the band name on it - does this mean it is self-titled or am i missing it? i like the black and white colour scheme and the use of the pictures throughout. the fonts and colours link together on each section and the 'special thanks' is a cute addition.
Good theme with black and white, interesting digipak pages. Improvement: make it fit a bit better into the boxes so it looks more professional
Most people seem to think that our digipak is over-busy, however most people also seem to think that it's too monochromatic, and that we've used too many pictures. However, a few people think it's pretty good as it is, with minor changes needed. Due to the mixed response, I think we should have a group meeting, so we can discuss the feedback together.
Black Beauty Music Video Feedback
after exporting the first draft of our music video, we have received the following comments for improvement:
We should re-think using black and white effects as it was a nice day when we filmed and the song is quite upbeat. The black and white makes it look a bit dull - the vintage filter over the top of the beach shots can be kept though as we received positive feedback for that
The pool shots need to be brightened up a bit to really stand out. At the moment they have a noise grain effect over them and we received feedback to say we should remove this effect and just make the blue stand out more
We need more shots with Beth and Drea playing instruments, as Emma is the main singer people were confused what part Beth and Drea played in being a girl band - to emphasis we are the producers and we play instruments in the song we need to incorporate more shots to highlight this
Overall, we received a lot of positive feedback about our music video, saying it was very impressive and looked very professional. People generally liked all of the shots we have included and the cuts we have chosen to use
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