Our first draft feedback

Feedback 

We received a number of varied feed backs. The average score was between 28-32 which is just coming into the level 4.
To work on

* The main feedback that we got was that people did not like the mis en scene that we always have black and white. They said that we should try and make it more colorful.

* We also received feedback about the fact that they don't think that the group look as harmonized as they could be. Some people are asking what the point in Beth and Drea are in the group and it isn't clear what they are doing?

* We also were told that the music room scenes are a bit disjointed and random, we should either maybe film more bits similar to this or scarp this and fill it in with other parts.

Good bits 
* The editing was really good people thought. They think that the transitions are really smooth.

* They also thought that Emma's performance in the band was really good. They said that her lip syncing is of a really good standard.