First Draft: After Feedback



We decided to change the black and white shots that were in the video at the start as people were explaining how it didn't look interesting enough. We decided to play around with the effects and changed the color of the shots around.

We also removed the noisy grain effect on the pool shots and made the blue stand out more using the RGB curves color editing in premiere.

We have also included more shots of Beth and Drea to make it more recognizable that we are in a group and that there is not one main individual vocalist. This was the main feedback that we recieved in that the group didn't look harmonized.